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Ages 9 to 11
The Brilliant Writer
Real-Life Strong Sentences, Paragraphs, Description, Storytelling & Editing
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Pack four in the Ages 9 to 11 Vocabulary & Language collection. Forty activities that take ordinary writing and make it clear, interesting and organised: sentence craft, paragraph architecture, showing rather than telling, storytelling, writing for a purpose and layered editing.
What's included
- What makes writing good, and starting with the main point
- Building strong sentences and choosing stronger verbs
- Sentence length, varied openings, combining choppy sentences
- Fixing run-ons and giving each paragraph one clear job
- Show, do not always tell, and using the senses selectively
- Replacing generic description, describing without naming, zooming in
- Creating atmosphere and writing strong story openings
- Building character through action and dialogue that does something
- Planning before writing, the middle, and strong endings
- Writing for a purpose and an audience, formal or informal
- Proper emails, clear instructions, notes into a report
- Cutting the waffle, removing repetition and editing in layers
Who it's for
Parents and carers of children aged 9 to 11 who want writing that is clear, organised and genuinely worth reading.